Before learning the steps and techniques of writing a good Horror/Scary short story, you first, have to understand the basics of a horror fiction, which is ”fear”.
What Is Fear, And Why Do We Love Reading Horror Fiction?
Fear by the definition is an unpleasant feeling triggered by the threat of a danger, pain, harm both real or imaginary and when we experience this strong emotion ”the fear” in our comfort zone where we are safe from all the evils happening in the story or the movie we are watching then this unpleasant feeling of fear gets turned into an extremely ocular pleasant enjoyable and amusing experience.
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In short the amusing feeling of reading a horror story or watching a horror movie can be related to a person who enjoys eating his favorite spicy food to feel its burning pleasure.
For Beginners– If you are an aspiring writer in hurry who has just started his writing journey and want to earn a name as a writer fast then writing a Horror Fiction or Horror Short Story is a great way to begin with because a Horror Fiction is always a good genre to debut yourself as an author, as potential readers easily take chance on reading a Horror Fiction written by a new writer and I too had started my writing Journey three years back writing The Drunken Ghost, a strange scary short storybook.
So Horror fiction is always in a great demand either in the print or the visible media.
Many writers have earned a big name in writing horror fiction.
Do read: How to Narrate a Story in Writing
But are you ”The Tough Guy”?
I believe someone who gets scared the most can write an awesome horror or a scary story. So If you fear going alone in a dark basement, fear ghosts, get uncomfortable when a creepy stranger looks at you in a subway, you feel fear when someone seems following you on streets, you enjoy watching horror movies but at night you regret that then there is a great chance you can write a better horror story.
But what If you are “the tough guy” who doesn’t get scared easily and can binge horror at night alone without any fear then first you have to understand how horror feels like.
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Pro Writing Tips:
Whatever a story you write, make sure the reader gets disconnects from the real world, surrounding and should get completely indulge into your story. So throw your words wisely.
As we all know, we get frightened the most reading those horror stories where we see the characters are ordinary beings not so capable of facing the fear.
So no one will enjoys a horror story where the characters are the extraordinary tough guys easily handling their fears.
What is a short story?
A story in a short form is called a Short story and can be easily read in just one sitting giving the reader a quick reading experience. A short story also contains all the elements which we see in a novella or a novel but is less elaborated, and mostly with fewer characters and fewer plot events.
- Any piece of fiction under 8000 words is considered a short story.
- A short story is traditionally written under 1500 – 5000 words.
- A story written under 500 words is called a micro fiction
See How to write a short story in 9 simple steps before start writing your horror short story.
Some of the famous horror short stories:
- “NightShift” by Stephen King
- “The Tell-Tale Heart” by Edgar Allan Poe
- “The Lottery” by Shirley Jackson
- “The Black Cat” by Edgar Allan Poe
- ‘’The Monkey’s Paw’’ by W.W Jacobs
- “The DunWich Horror” by H.P Lovecraft
- “The Pit and the Pendulum” by Edgar Allan Poe
- “The Cask Of Amontillado” by Edgar Allan Poe
- ‘’The Call of Cthulhu” by H.P Lovecraft
- And ‘’The Drunken Ghost’’ by Neel Rana (me) still less famous*
Reading some of the best works of famous horror writers like Edgar Allan Poe, Shirley Jackson, H.P Lovecraft and Stephen King, etc. will help you a lot in understanding the craft and techniques of writing a great horror short story.
Watch the below short video by TedEd to understand how Edgar Ellan Poe, one of the great short story writers wrote amazing horror short stories that still amazes, excites, and horrify their readers and why should you need to read his works before start witting your own horror short story.
Writing a scary story or writing a horror short story both involves all the same elements, just when we write a short horror fiction we need to take care of the length of the story because here we cannot elaborate on all the scary and horrific events or scenes a lot as we do in writing a novel.
So we have to write all the events and plot while making a balance between the beginning, the middle, and the ending of the story because you don’t want to end up writing a half novel which cannot be published until you publish it as a first part of the series.
If you are writing your first horror story or short story then it may feel a little tough but once you will write your first few pages you turn into a writing addict and will not stop until you finish the story.
Now just follow these 6 simple and proven steps and write your first horror story today.
For Horror Short Story Ideas Read my blog on 101 Best Horror Short Story Ideas
Now let’s begin
How To Write A Horror Short Story step by step:
1. Choose Your Fear Factor
2. Use The Key Elements Of Horror
3. Use Scary Tone
4. Set A Scary Back Ground
5. Place A Plot Twist
6. Use The Triple S Concept- Survive, Search, Scare
7. Save The Secrets For The Right Time.
Step 1- Choose your Fear Factor
A horror story includes some fear factor on which the whole story moves. These fear factors are well known in every horror story.
- Supernatural entities– The oldest fear factors of humans. Since the beginning of mankind, the fear of supernatural entities is prominent. When people started believing in the strong almighty entity, the gods, then they also began believing in evil spirits, ghosts, and supernatural entities. Humans used to pray from the almighty to protect them from the evil spirits and supernatural stuff. People yet in this age love to read stories based on ghosts and supernatural entities.
The vampires, werewolves, zombies, Frankenstein, Bigfoots, witches, trolls, goblins, etc. are well-known favorite fears of everyone because these are popular fear factors mostly among young readers and even children. A little reader may not read a horror story based on supernatural entities or a horror crime thriller but can happily enjoy a bigfoot story, witches and witchcraft, zombies, etc. so this fear factor broad your readership.
This is the fear of a new modern world where people want to know what If an unknown entity, an alien interacts with humans then how we will cope up with the situation and survive. But it’s the hardest fear factor to choose to scare a reader because someone hardly gets scared by reading an alien invasion or interaction with humans in comparison with getting feared by reading a ghost story.
- Humans–We humans get feared by our own species a lot. This is also one of the prominent fear factors in a horror story. You don’t want your favorite character in the story to get followed by a psycho killer for no reason and you read the whole story just to know if your ordinary and sweet character survived the psycho killer or not.
Pro writing tips–
Create Helplessness-If any character in the story is suffering from a body defect or not capable of doing something which is normal for everyone then you can create an immense fear among your readers when they will see how your sweet character with a body defect will face and survive the fear.
Like we saw in the movie Annabelle when one character, a little handicapped girl not capable of walking is attacked by an evil spirit where she looked helpless and cannot fight back.
So imagine what if a character in your horror story suffers from a speaking defect and can’t shout and tell the other characters to save her from the evil.
This shit will make your readers go upside down and will create huge unrest, fear, and terror.
Step-2 Use the key elements of horror
The horror story moves on four major elements-
These elements decide your story success and failure.
Use of these elements carelessly and without a proper and balanced way can make your horror story go ineffective and worthless to read. These four elements must be present in any horror story.
Fear– Fear is the basic element of a horror story and is like a pizza dough that no one will eat until you add the tasty toppings of mystery, suspense and surprise.
Fear is useless and ineffective alone and a horror story only containing fear is worthless to read.
Like no one will be interested in just eating a plain pizza dough without any toppings same as no one will be interested in reading a horror story where the characters only facing some fears with no suspense, mystery, or surprise.
Imagine how boring is to read a ghost or a monster or a psycho killer just scaring the characters in the story with no mystery behind who really they are and why they are doing so.
The suspense and mystery play an important role in engaging the reader’s mind deeply into the story and holds the reader’s attention strongly till the end of the story.
Difference between Mystery and Suspense.
Some people get confused about the difference between mystery and suspense.
I have seen on many questioning forums that people are confused about the differences between them.
Let’s understand their differences from this simple example-
- Mystery-Murphy wants to know the mystery behind the locked room in his grandpa’s house.
- Suspense- Murphy’s dad promised to tell him about the locked room once they all leave the place.
So now you can understand easily the waiting phase of readers for knowing the mystery of something is called Suspense.
Step 3- Use scary tone
Start playing with words and write every ordinary event in a scary tone. Choose your words wisely while writing a horrific scene and you will give goosebumps to your readers without even showing a single ghost or the psycho killer in the story.
- How to narrate the story in a scary tone:
Here are the examples of how you can turn a simple-looking word into goosebumps giving sentence-
The psycho killer called Murphy many times but Murphy didn’t answer the call-[Not so scary]
The phone rang many times at night but Murphy couldn’t dare to pick up.-[Scary]
The psycho killer then sends a message to Murphy says he is outside his main door.-[Not so scary]
The phone ringing stopped with a strange message for Murphy, the message read –Hi dear Murphy why are you hiding from me, don’t you want to meet your new friend who is waiting for so long outside your home just to meet you, dear.-[Scary]
Step 4- Set a Scary Background
Ever imagined what else can scare someone the more except the ghosts, the monsters, an unknown entity, or any other kind of fear. It’s the background setting and the lonely environment.
This is the reason while watching horror movies we can get scared as hell even by a little kid suddenly appearing from nowhere.
A little kid, one who looks very innocent and practically harmless for the characters in the film but when this little one placed into a dark wrecked room filled with old stuff and kids toys and when you see this little kid in the darkroom playing alone with his toys, you will not dare to enter into the room alone to talk with that little innocent cute looking kid.
A well-written background doesn’t even require the dark or night to scare someone.
Assume if you are alone at your home, chilling on your couch while watching your favorite T.V show at 3 P.M afternoon the day time with all the sunshine coming into your house by the window then suddenly you feel like you are not alone in the house and someone is behind you, you turned back and found no one but soon you see a little girl in white dress peeping at you from behind the curtains and then goes into a room slowly.
Either you will leave your house immediately or you will follow the little girl in curiosity and maybe later found that she was your neighbor’s little niece who had came to visit her uncle on her birthday and while playing hide and seek mistakenly entered your house but in both ways, you are scared as hell before knowing about her.
Step 5 Place a plot twist.
The plot twist and turns in any story are like the turn and zenith slopes in the roller-coaster ride which makes it more enjoyable and scary as well.
Assume your main character in the story is searching for his lost daughter in a wrecked town full of strangers but get helped by a sweet but strange woman in the search and at the end, he found out that no one knows the woman in town and the address of the place which she had said she lives is turn out to be a graveyard.
Or the innocent-looking dumb friend whom everyone mocks all the time turns out to be the psycho killer who killed every friend.
So the twist in a horror story is like extra cheese on pizza, which everyone wants to eat.
So take one character from your story and give him a little twist to give your readers the best horror reading experience.
Step 6 Use the Triple S Concept- Survive, Search, Scare.
Have you ever notice what basically happens in most of the horror stories.
The main goal of the protagonist (the main character) and the other characters in any horror story is either to survive from the horrific evil entity or to search for something, someone, some truth along with facing the fear or nothing in the control of the characters and they are not doing anything except getting scared by the evil entity.
Or these all three things are happening simultaneously
So they are scared but they had to search for something and also had to survive while searching for their goal.
So use the Triple-S concepts.
- Survive– Let your characters struggle hard to survive in the story.
- Search- Write a story plot in which the protagonist (the main character) is searching for the truth behind all the evil events or let him search for someone lost in the struggle.
- Scare– Let the fear factor in your horror story scaring the characters of the story all the time and they are looking for the answer that why all horrific things are happening with them.
So the uses of the Triple-S concept are common in horror tales.
No horror story exists without the use of these three S’s.
So take it as the base of your story and create everything on it, decorate your story with whatever fear elements you like to use.
Step 7-Save the secrets for the right time.
While writing doesn’t reveal the important secrets of the story so easily.
Give your readers full time to ride their horse of imagination. If there is a shadow that is present at all the terrible events or at the death of characters in the story don’t reveal its secret until you have completely terrorized your readers.
Let your reader guess who is actually behind the killing of the characters or a character, is it a ghost, an unknown evil spirit, or a psycho killer.
Take your time and reveal it when you have nothing else to elaborate on in the story.
GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR HORROR STORY
And don’t forget to read my blog 101 Best Horror Vocabulary to Know before writing a horror story.
Now after completing your book you may want to publish it somewhere.
Google Play Books Store is a good way to start.
Want to know How to Publish and Sell Your Horror Short Storybook on Google Play Books store then do Read my blog post on How to Publish a Book on Google Play Books Store.
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