Show don’t tell is a popular writing technique used by the storytellers allowing the readers to experience the story, their characters rather than just reading the writers’ descriptions and the exposition of the story.
The technique follows describing the sensory details of characters and the actions or the situation occurring in the story encouraging readers to involve their own minds and senses into deciphering and imagining the story and their characters.
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This helps writers to connect the readers with their story, the characters and builds an emotional attachment into reader heart evoking emotions through this technique of storytelling.
This writing style is attributed to a popular Russian playwright Anton Chekhov, who quoted:
Don’t tell me the moon is shining, Show me the glint of the light on the broken glass
Note: When using show don’t tell writing style try to avoid the use any emotion explaining words like happy, angry, sad, frustrated etc. and also all basic sensory words like heard, felt, terrified etc. as far as possible .
The only flaw of using show don’t tell writing technique is that it sometimes increases the length of the story and can make it unnecessarily long so writers are advised to use it not so often and only where the story needs exaggeration of the situation, feelings, emotions or to set a tone of the story, setting or the situation.
Understand Show don’t tell with these simple examples.
Tell: The temperature was hot last summer.
Show: The sun was melting last summer.
Emotions should not be said, they should be shown.
Learn with the below examples to make your own show don’t tell sentences and to understand the technique of showing emotions like happiness, sadness, anger, excitement, fear etc. in the story with your writing instead of directly telling it to your readers.
Examples of Show Don’t Tell for: Happy
He was jumping up and down with joy.
Sunshine flooded her soul.
His smile broadened from ear to ear.
She was swimming in the sea of heavens.
The sun was kissing her rosy red cheeks in the bright daylight.
She was on cloud nine when he proposed her.
He was over the moon when she asked his name.
Her skin tingled and eyes sparkled.
Adam started breathing quickly when she looked at him.
Peter was walking on air after passing the exam.
Christy was on seventh heaven when she found out that she was pregnant.
He was in high spirit.
Everyone heart pounded with happiness and their soul started dancing.
Songs of the heavens were buzzing into his ears.
His eyes were wide open when he suddenly saw her in a new dress.
Example of Show Don’t Tell For: Angry
He clenched his fist, raised his voice and suddenly slammed his hands on the table.
His cheeks turned red and eyebrows got narrowed.
His soul was burning.
She growled at him through clenched teeth.
He started huffing and puffing and slammed the door.
The flames of the hell were nurturing the monster inside him.
His veins were popping out from his skin.
His bright red face was telling every thing.
Example of Show Don’t Tell For: Sad
Her eyes welled up with tears.
The whole world suddenly disappeared for her.
The weight of the grief was crushing her soul.
A drop of tear fell down her cheek
Her soul was drowning into the river of her grief.
She was sinking into the deep sea of her tears.
Yet Confused on How to Use Show Don’t Tell ?
Than Watch this informative video by Diane Callahan explaining the use of show not tell in the best way possible.
For more show don’t tell ideas for happiness do read How to describe happiness in writing by Bryn Donovan